Clean up release notes for 6.2.0

This is cleaned up as of commit
2351d624aed7aae9d58ce37676c0181687be0e8a, and should be sufficient for
the final release. If something else with a release note lands, we can
make any changes there in a later patch.

Change-Id: Ia1ef442f3cc0d64c8a7c6fbb5aaf3f0160f214de

releasenotes/notes/add-notifications-97b6c79c18b48073.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 ---
 features:
-  - Add support for inter-service notifications (disabled by default until the
+  - Adds support for inter-service notifications (disabled by default until the
     ``notification_level`` configuration option is set). For more information,
     see the notifications documentation in the developer's guide
     (http://docs.openstack.org/developer/ironic/dev/notifications.html).
+    Notifications are not actually emitted yet, but will be added in a future
+    release.

releasenotes/notes/add_infiniband_support-f497767f77277a1a.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 features:
-  - Add support for InfiniBand network to allow
+  - Adds support for InfiniBand networking to allow
-    Hardware inspection and PXE boot over InfiniBand.
+    hardware inspection and PXE boot over InfiniBand.

releasenotes/notes/add_standalone_ports_supported_field-4c59702a052acf38.yaml

@@ -3,4 +3,4 @@ features:
   - Add the field `standalone_ports_supported` to the
     portgroup object. This field indicates whether
     ports that are members of this portgroup can be
-    used as stand alone ports. By default is True.
+    used as stand-alone ports. The default is True.

releasenotes/notes/check-dynamic-allocation-enabled-e94f3b8963b114d0.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 ---
 fixes:
-  - dynamic_allocation flag in node's driver_info can now accept all
+  - The ``dynamic_allocation`` flag in a node's driver_info previously
-    the values that can be converted to booleans by bool_from_string
+    only accepted a Boolean. It now also accepts the strings 't', 'true',
-    function from oslo_utils.
+    'on', 'y', 'yes', or '1' as True, and the strings 'f', 'false', 'off', 'n',
+    'no', or '0' as False. These are matched case-insensitively.

releasenotes/notes/deny-too-long-chassis-description-0690d6f67ed002d5.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 fixes:
-  - Deny too long description of chassis
+  - The API now returns an appropriate error message when a chassis
-    (more than 255 chars) with appropriate
+    description over 255 characters is specified.
-    correct message.

releasenotes/notes/deprecate-clustered-compute-manager-3dd68557446bcc5c.yaml

@@ -1,12 +1,10 @@
 ---
 deprecations:
   - |
-    In Nova commit 6047d790a32ef5a65d4d6b029f673ce53c3d4141,
+    The ClusteredComputeManager is now deprecated.
-    functionality is added to the ironic virt
-    driver to support multiple compute hosts without using the hack
-    we call ClusteredComputeManager.
 
-    We anticipate this being included in the Newton release of Nova.
+    The Newton version of Nova adds functionality to the ironic virt driver to
-    In advance of that, we are marking this unsupported component
+    support multiple compute hosts without using the hack we call
-    as deprecated, and plan to remove it before the end of the Ocata
+    ClusteredComputeManager. As such, we are marking this unsupported
+    component as deprecated, and plan to remove it before the end of the Ocata
     development cycle.

releasenotes/notes/drac-raid-interface-f4c02b1c4fb37e2d.yaml

@@ -3,9 +3,8 @@ features:
   - Adds out-of-band RAID management to DRAC driver using the generic RAID
     interface which makes the functionality available via manual cleaning
     steps.
-upgrade:
+  - New configuration option, ``[drac]/query_raid_config_job_status_interval``
-  - New configuration option, ``[drac]query_raid_config_job_status_interval``
+    was added. After Ironic has created the RAID config job on the DRAC card,
-    is added. After Ironic has created the RAID config job on the DRAC card,
     it continues to check for status update on the config job to determine
-    whether the RAID configuration was successfully finished at this interval.
+    whether the RAID configuration was successfully finished within
-    Default is 120 seconds.
+    this interval. Default is 120 seconds.

releasenotes/notes/erase-devices-metadata-config-f39b6ca415a87757.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 features:
   - Adds a new ``[deploy]/erase_devices_metadata_priority`` configuration
-    option to allow operators to configure the priority (or disable) of the
+    option to allow operators to configure the priority of (or disable) the
     "erase_devices_metadata" cleaning step.
 upgrade:
   - The new "erase_devices_metadata" cleaning step is enabled by

releasenotes/notes/fix-url-collisions-43abfc8364ca34e7.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 fixes:
-  - Removed invalid accidental API URL v1/nodes/ports
+  - Removed invalid API URL ``/v1/nodes/ports``.
-    See https://bugs.launchpad.net/ironic/+bug/1580997
+    For more information, see https://bugs.launchpad.net/ironic/+bug/1580997.

releasenotes/notes/inspector-session-179f83cbb0dc169b.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 fixes:
-  - Ironic Inspector inspection interface will not fetch the service endpoint
+  - Ironic Inspector inspection interface will now fetch the service endpoint
     for the service catalog, if "service_url" is not provided and keystone
     support is enabled.
 upgrade:

releasenotes/notes/ipxe-use-swift-5ccf490daab809cc.yaml

@@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
 features:
   - By default, the ironic-conductor service caches the node's deploy
     ramdisk and kernel images locally and serves them via a separate
-    HTTP server. A new ``[pxe]ipxe_use_swift`` configuration option
+    HTTP server. A new ``[pxe]/ipxe_use_swift`` configuration option
     (disabled by default) allows images to be accessed directly
     from object store via Swift temporary URLs.
-    This is only applicable if iPXE is enabled (via ``[pxe]ipxe_enabled``
+    This is only applicable if iPXE is enabled (via ``[pxe]/ipxe_enabled``
     configuration option) and image store is in Glance/Swift.
     For user images that are partition images requiring non-local boot,
     the default behavior with local caching and an HTTP server

releasenotes/notes/mask-configdrive-contents-77fc557d6bc63b2b.yaml

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
 features:
-  - This change adds a new policy rule that may be used to mask
+  - Adds a new policy rule that may be used to mask
     instance-specific secrets, such as configdrive contents or the temp URL
     used to store a configdrive or instance image.  This is similar to how
     passwords are already masked.
 upgrade:
-  - After this change, instance secrets will, by default, be masked in API
+  - Instance secrets will now, by default, be masked in API
     responses.  Operators wishing to expose the configdrive or instance image
     to specific users will need to update their policy.json file and grant the
     relevant keystone roles.
@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@ security:
     own images, which could also contain sensitive information.  The Agent
     drivers may store this information in a Swift temp URL to allow access from
     the Agent ramdisk. These URLs are considered sensitive information because
-    they grant unauthenticated access to sensitive information.  With this
+    they grant unauthenticated access to sensitive information.  Now,
-    change, we being to only selectively expose this information to privileged
+    we only selectively expose this information to privileged
     users, whereas previously it was exposed to all authenticated users.

releasenotes/notes/proliantutils_version_update-b6e5ff0e496215a5.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
-  - Updated proliantutils required version number for iLO drivers
+  - The minimum required version of proliantutils (needed for iLO
-    to 2.1.11. This version includes fixes for the bugs caused by
+    drivers) was bumped to 2.1.11. This version includes fixes for the bugs
-    python request library version 2.11.0, Proliant Gen7 support
+    caused by python request library version 2.11.0, Proliant Gen7 support and
-    and iLO based RAID configuration.
+    iLO based RAID configuration.

releasenotes/notes/scciclient-0.4.0-6f01c0f0a5c39062.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
-  - Updated python-scciclient required version number for iRMC driver to
+  - The minimum required version of python-scciclient (needed for the iRMC
-    0.4.0 which contains the bug fix '#1561852' and miscellaneous improvement.
+    driver) was bumped to 0.4.0.

releasenotes/notes/update-live-port-ee3fa9b77f5d0cf7.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - Fixed updating a MAC on a port for active instances in maintenance mode
-    (used to return HTTP 500 previously).
+    (previously returned HTTP 500).
   - Return HTTP 400 for requests to update a MAC on a port for an active
-    instance without maintenance mode set (used to return HTTP 500 previously).
+    instance without maintenance mode set (previously returned HTTP 500).

releasenotes/notes/update-proliant-required-version-71665e87bfad0a4d.yaml

@@ -1,5 +0,0 @@
----
-upgrade:
-  - Updated proliantutils required version number for iLO drivers
-    to 2.1.10 which fixes the defects of iLO based firmware upgrade
-    and iLO based RAID configuration.