[release] Tidy up release notes for Zed

Change-Id: If98434d7941cf319b0689441827290791f596a04

releasenotes/notes/bifrost-deploy-verbosity-f6a90727649285b5.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 ---
 features:
   - |
-    With the parameter ``bifrost_deploy_verbosity`` it is possible
+    Adds ``bifrost_deploy_verbosity`` parameter. It allows to change
-    to set the verbosity of the bootstrap of Bifrost.
+    the verbosity of the Bifrost bootstrap task.
-
+    ``-vvvv`` is a default value.
-    By default ``-vvvv`` is set.

releasenotes/notes/bug-1982777-0cac9753aa18a037.yaml

@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    Fixes 1982777.
+    Fixes `LP#1982777 <https://launchpad.net/bugs/1982777>`__.
     Set multipathd user_friendly_names to "no"
     to make os-brick able to resize volumes online.
     Adds ability to override multipathd config.
-    `LP#1982777 <https://launchpad.net/bugs/1982777>`__

releasenotes/notes/bug-1987982-fix-keystone-log_bin_trust_function_creators-variables-8628098891513dac.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    Fixed `bug #1987982  <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla-ansible/+bug/1987982>`_
+    Fixed `bug #1987982  <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla-ansible/+bug/1987982>`_.
     This bug caused the database log_bin_trust_function_creators variable
     not to be set back to "OFF" after a keystone upgrade.

releasenotes/notes/drop-keystone-token-provider-variable-6d18857276295bd6.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
-  - The variable keystone_token_provider does not exist anymore,
+  - The variable ``keystone_token_provider`` does not exist anymore,
     because there is no alternative.

releasenotes/notes/feature-1968597-4b414566f82c90fa.yaml

@@ -1,14 +1,10 @@
 ---
 features:
   - |
-    Adds ability to configure the Prometheus pushgateway options of its URL.
+    Adds a new variable ``ceilometer_prometheus_pushgateway_options``.
 
-    Adds a new variable ``ceilometer_prometheus_pushgateway_options``. This is
+    It is dictionary whose keys and respective values are added to
-    a dictionary whose keys are the options to be set and its values contain
+    the pushgateway's URL, checking that no "None" value is being set.
-    what to set them to.
-
-    These options and respective values are then added to the pushgateway's
-    URL, checking that no "None" value is being set.
 
     For example, the following configurations:
 

releasenotes/notes/fix-masakari-conf-missing-taskflow-section-31b6654e29bec35d.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    fix missing [taskflow] section in masakari.conf.j2
+    Fixes missing ``[taskflow]`` section in masakari.conf.j2
     `LP#1966536 <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla-ansible/+bug/1966536>`__

releasenotes/notes/fix-zun_cni_daemon-mounts-9a7664896cfc7a9f.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 fixes:
   - |
-    Fix zun capsules lose the network namespaces after restarting
+    Fixes Zun capsules loosing network namespaces after
-    zun_cni_daemon container
+    restarting zun_cni_daemon container

releasenotes/notes/haproxy-active-passive-523139557659d6e5.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
 features:
   - |
-    Supports configuration of arbitrary HAProxy services in active/passive
+    Adds support for setting up arbitrary HAProxy services in
-    mode.
+    active/passive mode.

releasenotes/notes/ironic-inspector-multiple-ranges-b7c734d38b90c331.yaml

@@ -12,8 +12,9 @@ upgrade:
     ``ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_default_lease_time`` variable or per range via
     ``lease_time`` parameter.
   - |
-    Replace usage of ``ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_range`` together with
+    Replaced ``ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_range`` and
-    ``ironic_dnsmasq_default_gateway`` to ``ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_ranges``.
+    ``ironic_dnsmasq_default_gateway`` in favour of
+    ``ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_ranges``.
     For example, if you have::
 
       ironic_dnsmasq_dhcp_range: "10.42.0.2,10.42.0.254,255.255.255.0"

releasenotes/notes/ironic-interface-afa7ffe9a341a892.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,5 @@
 ---
 features:
   - |
-    With the ``ironic_http_interface/ironic_http_interface_address``
+    Adds ``ironic_http_interface/ironic_http_interface_address``
-    parameters it is possible to set the addresses for the
+    parameters to set the addresses for the ``ironic_http`` service.
-    ``ironic_http`` service.

releasenotes/notes/ovn-probe-timeouts-6b7747486d59e58e.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 features:
   - |
-    For ovn added ovn-openflow-probe-interval variable, it sets
+    Adds ``ovn-openflow-probe-interval`` variable. It sets
     the inactivity probe interval of the OpenFlow connection
     to the OpenvSwitch integration bridge, in seconds. If the
     value is zero, it disables the connection keepalive feature.
@@ -10,5 +10,5 @@ features:
 upgrade:
   - |
     For ovn the default value of openflow-probe-interval was
-    changed to 60 seconds. Use the ovn-openflow-probe-interval
+    changed to 60 seconds. Use the ``ovn-openflow-probe-interval``
     variable to override.

releasenotes/notes/remove-deprecated-enable_ironic_ipxe-70addb60a0b3caa7.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 upgrade:
   - |
-    The deprecated ``enable_ironic_ipxe`` has been removed. The iPXE still
+    The deprecated ``enable_ironic_ipxe`` variable has been removed.
-    works by default and it can be disabled by setting the more-aptly-named
+    The iPXE still works by default and it can be disabled by setting
-    ``ironic_dnsmasq_serve_ipxe`` to ``false``.
+    the more-aptly-named ``ironic_dnsmasq_serve_ipxe`` to ``false``.