Language tweaks in multi-region docs for clarity

Tweaked some of the language in doc/source/user/multi-regions.rst for
clarity purposes.

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Raimund Hook 2019-07-12 12:24:25 +01:00
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Multiple Regions Deployment with Kolla
======================================
This section describes how to perform a basic multiple regions deployment
with Kolla. A basic multiple regions deployment consists of separate
OpenStack installation in two or more regions (RegionOne, RegionTwo, ...)
This section describes how to perform a basic multiple region deployment
with Kolla. A basic multiple region deployment consists of separate
OpenStack installations in two or more regions (RegionOne, RegionTwo, ...)
with a shared Keystone and Horizon. The rest of this documentation assumes
Keystone and Horizon are deployed in RegionOne, and other regions have
access to the admin endpoint (for example, ``kolla_internal_fqdn``) of
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Deployment of the first region results in a typical Kolla deployment
whenever, it is an *all-in-one* or *multinode* deployment (see
whether it is an *all-in-one* or *multinode* deployment (see
:doc:`quickstart`). It only requires slight modifications in the
``/etc/kolla/globals.yml`` configuration file. First of all, ensure that
Keystone and Horizon are enabled:
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Then, change the value of ``multiple_regions_names`` to add names of other
regions. In this example, we consider two regions. The current one,
formerly knows as RegionOne, that is hided behind
formerly known as RegionOne, that is hidden behind
``openstack_region_name`` variable, and the RegionTwo:
.. code-block:: yaml
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domain_name: "default"
Configuration files of cinder,nova,neutron,glance... have to be updated to
contact RegionOne's Keystone. Fortunately, Kolla offers to override all
contact RegionOne's Keystone. Fortunately, Kolla allows you to override all
configuration files at the same time thanks to the
``node_custom_config`` variable (see :ref:`service-config`). This
implies to create a ``global.conf`` file with the following content:
``node_custom_config`` variable (see :ref:`service-config`). To do so,
create a ``global.conf`` file with the following content:
.. code-block:: ini