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@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ share the ideas of how we can evaluate, analyse and test OpenStack cloud
performance, including the very infrastructure basics.
As a community we want this knowledge to become publicly available to allow
OpenStack developers, QA engineers and operators to have unified way for their
projects and products evaluation and best recipes for doing this.
OpenStack developers, QA engineers and operators to have a unified way for their
projects and products evaluation and the best recipes for doing this.
Who will be interested in this?
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Who is contributing to this guide?
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Short answer: OpenStack community.
Short answer: The OpenStack community.
A bit longer answer: performance engineers from various companies, cloud
operators, OpenStack projects developers, etc. We all are part of
**Performance Team**. Therefore you can find here
test plans and methodologies, that were written keeping in mind all these
groups of people, their interest and experience.
Longer answer: performance engineers from various companies, cloud
operators, OpenStack project developers, etc. We all are part of the
**Performance Team**. Therefore, here you can find
test plans and methodologies that were written keeping in mind all of these
groups of people, their interests and experiences.