diff --git a/doc/source/dist_cloud/distributed-upgrade-orchestration-process-using-the-cli.rst b/doc/source/dist_cloud/distributed-upgrade-orchestration-process-using-the-cli.rst index ccc7e5d5b..0b642eeaa 100644 --- a/doc/source/dist_cloud/distributed-upgrade-orchestration-process-using-the-cli.rst +++ b/doc/source/dist_cloud/distributed-upgrade-orchestration-process-using-the-cli.rst @@ -6,9 +6,8 @@ Distributed Upgrade Orchestration Process Using the CLI ======================================================= -Distributed upgrade orchestration can be initiated after the upgrade and -stability of the System Controller cloud. Distributed upgrade orchestration can -be initiated after the system controller has been successfully upgraded. +Distributed upgrade orchestration can be initiated after the System Controller +has been successfully upgraded. .. rubric:: |context| @@ -26,7 +25,7 @@ using parameters to specify: Based on these parameters, and the state of the subclouds, the upgrade -orchestrator creates a number of stages for the overall upgrade strategy. All +orchestration creates a number of stages for the overall upgrade strategy. All the subclouds that are included in the same stage will be upgraded in parallel. .. rubric:: |prereq| diff --git a/doc/source/dist_cloud/failure-during-the-installation-or-data-migration-of-n+1-load-on-a-subcloud.rst b/doc/source/dist_cloud/failure-during-the-installation-or-data-migration-of-n+1-load-on-a-subcloud.rst index 0052aae5b..d60408a1a 100644 --- a/doc/source/dist_cloud/failure-during-the-installation-or-data-migration-of-n+1-load-on-a-subcloud.rst +++ b/doc/source/dist_cloud/failure-during-the-installation-or-data-migration-of-n+1-load-on-a-subcloud.rst @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Errors can occur due to one of the following: - One or more invalid install values -- A network error that results in the subcloud's being temporarily unreachable +- A network error that results in the subcloud being temporarily unreachable **Failure Caused by Install Values** diff --git a/doc/source/dist_cloud/upgrade-management-overview.rst b/doc/source/dist_cloud/upgrade-management-overview.rst index c3514fe94..358a29ac4 100644 --- a/doc/source/dist_cloud/upgrade-management-overview.rst +++ b/doc/source/dist_cloud/upgrade-management-overview.rst @@ -73,11 +73,10 @@ The following prerequisites apply to a |prod-dc| upgrade management service. - Use the :command:`system application-remove` and :command:`system application-delete` commands to remove the application on the - subclouds. - - - Remove any non-GA applications and - |prefix|-openstack, from the |prod-dc| system, if they exist. + subclouds: + - Remove any non-GA and |prefix|-openstack applications, from the + |prod-dc| system, if they exist. .. only:: partner