From 904759a1565d4276a63733fa7dfb9f29f355b041 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kristal Dale Date: Wed, 11 Dec 2019 10:30:56 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] K8s cluster guide: Minor edits for grammar Minor edits for consistency with other docs and grammar fixes. Change-Id: I1f06263010b2f7d20e3d74cca77d223a96ab1352 Signed-off-by: Kristal Dale --- doc/source/operations/k8s_cluster.rst | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/source/operations/k8s_cluster.rst b/doc/source/operations/k8s_cluster.rst index 440161058..25919a303 100644 --- a/doc/source/operations/k8s_cluster.rst +++ b/doc/source/operations/k8s_cluster.rst @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ StarlingX Kubernetes is a private cloud software project that deploys a Kubernetes cluster on dedicated physical servers. With a range of deployment configurations, it can be deployed from the data center to the edge of the network. This provides a single solution to deploy your containerized -applications, regardless of where they are located. It's ability to scale both +applications, regardless of where they are located. Its ability to scale both large and small makes StarlingX Kubernetes ideal for edge deployments. StarlingX Kubernetes provides a fully-managed solution that includes both Day-1 @@ -36,11 +36,11 @@ and Day-2 operations with respect to managing a cloud native platform: * Kubernetes software * Supporting open-source software such as Ceph, Apache, and Postgres. * Log and performance metrics are collected and reported for both hardware and - software components + software components. * Security is addressed across a variety of attack surfaces that includes TLS support, user authentication/authorization, and network firewalls on all external interfaces, with support for technologies such as UEFI Secure Boot, - signed software updates + signed software updates. All of the above solutions are fully-integrated and ready-to-deploy with default configurations that optimize performance and scalability. @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ StarlingX application package manager ************************************* Use the StarlingX :command:`system application-*` commands to manage -containerized application deployment from the command-line. +containerized application deployment from the commandline. StarlingX application management provides a wrapper around `Airship Armada `_ and @@ -197,15 +197,15 @@ Use the following commands with the StarlingX application manager: Delete a Helm chart’s user-overrides for a particular namespace. ``application-apply`` - Apply or reapply the application manifest and Helm charts. This command will - install or update the existing installation of the application based on its + Apply or reapply the application manifest and Helm charts. This command + installs or updates the existing installation of the application based on its Armada manifest, Helm charts, and Helm charts’ combined system and user overrides. ``application-abort`` Abort the current application operation. ``application-update`` - Update the deployed application to a different version + Update the deployed application to a different version. ``application-remove`` Uninstall an application.